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Monday, 24 March 2014

Why do we use a knife and fork.


Why do we use a knife and fork?

Have you ever been embarrassed by the way you're eating? If you eat with a knife and fork you will show good manners, not get germs in your mouth and your hands will stay clean.



Hygiene
If you use a knife and fork you won’t get sick from the germs on your hands and they won’t get sticky and dirty. Well if you rush while washing hands you will still have germs in them. Like Germs when you cof into to them, dirty finger if you play outside on the field , or eating something and leaving on your hands.

Manners
If you eat with your hands in front of your friends parents they will get in barest by you. By the way your eat and they might not invite you to there house again. Then you might feel sad. And never ever put your fingers in your drink cause that is mixing food into your drink and when you drink out of it it will get you really sick never do that you will get a sore stomach.

Big pieces and small pieces
If you have big chunks of meat you might choke,Can’t swallow or it will get stuck in your throat. If you have meat in small pieces you won’t choke or swallow slow.’

So if you always use your knife and fork you won’t get embarrassed in front of everyone. And your hands won’t get dirty and greasy so you don’t always have to use your hands. And so you can keep clean.




Quinlan
Sohel

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Why do we use an knife and fork
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2 comments:

  1. Hi Quinlan
    I really enjoyed reading your blog. I hope you enjoyed eating last night's tea. Please try and find your brother's jumper.

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  2. Nice work Quilan! We enjoyed looking at your blogs for parent training today!

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