Thursday, 14 August 2014

Chapter 1 Georgia Watson is Embarrassed!!!

Georgia-May Watson lived in a big country  called the USA but she had school in NYC. she lived there with her family. In her family she has a big brother that was always mean to her she had a mum and dad a little sister that she loves and last but not least a annoying puppy that can talk that's why it is annoying.

One day Georgia was walking to school. She was one of the popular girls in the school but she was really mean. So then she tuned unpopular. She was sad everyone was mocking her.

So she ran in the toilets and didn't come out till after school. When she heard the bell ring she sneaked out while no one was looking. She was embarrassed. Why wasn't she popular maybe because she was mean to other girls.


  1. Wow! I am so impressed with what you have written there Quinlan, that is one classic story you have. Keep on working hard so that you may be successful for doing all you have done. Keep it up by doing the good work, may God bless you and to all the year six's in the class good by.

  2. Hi Quinlan,
    I liked your story. I am impressed with your writing, too. I loved the picture. Even though I drew it for you, but, anyways, that does not matter.

    Keep up the good work!


  3. Hi Quinlan,

    What a great sentce i love that photo it is so cute.

    Keep it Up Quinlan.


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